Writng Response To: Special Powers

Question: Pretend you have special powers and could put yourself in your reading. Were would you put yourself in the story and why? How would you being there change the story.
Answer:
I believe if I were to go in my story I would go to the water planet of Cloral. This place is very interesting to me and I would want to be able to see all of their new and special technology that the main character writes in his journals. The main thing I would want to do is to visit one of the larger cities and see the way the city works with it's road and waterways. The Lost City of Faar may sound very interesting and beautiful in the story, but the way the antagonist Saint Dane is attacking the city makes it sound like it would be a very tramatic experience to see. I believe I would freak out to see a giant dome like that crashing and letting thousands upon thousands of water into the paradise.
If I was in the story I would most likely mess up the way the city works. The way Uncle Press, another protagonist, stresses that you can't bring objects from other territories makes me believe that I would mess up the territory very drastically. The way they talk about changing the territory drastically with just one action makes me believe that I would destroy a territory in a couple of days. They talk about like it's one of those old TV shows about time traveling."Don't touch anything, or the future will be change forever!"